The Big Adventure
The time pirates were having a Battle on pirate ships. A map fell into the deep blue sea. A person found the map. he told his friends. They went on a big adventure. They found a secret entrance and went inside. I fell on a pirate ship. Inside was treasure. They kept the pirate ship and became millionaires. They had a mansion and helped homeless people and were so lucky.
by Matthew
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